Jaelyn's Paper As Caden's Inspiration

For journal writing yesterday, Caden wrote a story modeled after Jaelyn's story modeled after 20,000 Leagues Under the Sea :).  Getting him to write is like pulling teeth so when he brought me two pages without a single complaint, I was very impressed.  I've left his grammar and spelling mistakes.

     One day I was on a dive for the tiny yeti crab.  I knew I had to go to the bottom of the ocean to find.  A yeti crab can breath under water, go in extreme heat, and eats bacteria.  Soon I got to bottom of the ocean.  It was pitch black so I had to turn my light on.  It seemed that I din't need to because a huge wall of light started coming words me.  As it got closer I saw it was a school of fish, but not any fish.  They all had little balls of light on them.  It was a school of hungy deep sea anglers!  They all started nipping, and putting holes in my submarine.  Soon I would die.  The was to much water.  Whene the water reached mynas I took a deep breath and asked myself, "why does there have to be so much water."  Then they made holes big enogn to fit through and had a midnight snack.